Screenwriting is a craft. Storytelling, an art.

    You have your story. Now you need to learn some craft; how to tell your story,
    how to put it on paper, how to write that jaw-dropping screenplay.

    I have studied screenwriting for the past 4 years including formatting,
    plot/structure, pacing, dialogue and characterisation.

    You want a better screenplay, well, that is where I can help. I'll read your
    script and write an in-depth analysis and review of your screenplay. I'll
    find those specific reasons why your script doesn't work (assuming,
    your script doesn't work). I'll cover everything pertinent regarding the
    mechanics, formatting and story content. I'll provide you with script/page
    notes and offer specific suggestions to improve your story. We can discuss
    it face-to-face if you like, and I'll help you with a one-page synopsis and
    the all-important agent query letter. I'll do all of this in a very
    professional manner. Everything we discuss will be kept strictly confidential
    and you will retain sole ownership of the material at all times.

    I'm going to give you the tools you need to be the best writer you can be.
    An extract from a sample outline and accompanying critique follows.

    Please contact me to discuss your individual needs and obtain a quote.

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